My Editorial Services

I believe the best books stem from collaboration between editor and writer and it is a pity that the limitations in publishing today rule out this initial meeting. I will fill that gap. The results can be original and fresh for when two creative heads are put together, the combustion can lead to a powerful and unexpected journey. It is only by honing ideas that the best result can take place.

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My Editorial Services, offer critiques, developmental editing, line editing, and query letter feedback. I refine manuscripts, focusing on engaging plots, age-appropriate language, and strong character development, working with authors on everything from story flow and pacing to commercial viability, ensuring the final product captivates kids and meets industry standards. I guide the book's creation and development, often reading aloud to catch rhythm and flow issues. The aim of a developmental edit is to help you shape your manuscript.
I give an in-depth editorial report plus extensive line by line comments. The most common edit I make is condensing because children’s books are so short, every word carries enormous weight.

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In short, I offer:

• Manuscript Evaluation: Reviewing submissions for potential and quality.
• Developmental Editing: Shaping the story, fixing plot holes, and strengthening character arcs.
• Line Editing: Refining language, ensuring clarity, rhythm, and age-appropriateness.
• Collaboration: Working closely with authors and illustrators.
• Production Oversight: Guiding design, layout, and marketing.

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I Look For:

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• An Engaging Story: A plot that keeps kids turning pages, with rising action and a satisfying climax.
• Memorable Characters: Unique, relatable characters with wide appeal.
• Strong Language: Precise word choices, varied sentence structure, and good pacing (often achieved by reading aloud).
• Commercial Potential: Ensuring the book is marketable and sells well. 

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Pricing for Children’s Books:

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• Under 500 words:     £400
• 500 – 1,000 words     £450
• 1,000 – 2,000 words:    £500
• 2,000 – 3,000 words:  £550
• 3,000 – 4,000 words:  £600

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Longer novels are negotiable.

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